Chapter 10 is live! Please don't hate me.


Just gonna drop this right here and run...

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This was a tough but meaningful read... literally had tears forming. This story is so well written I just binged the whole thing, can't wait for future updates.


Also, I love Heron.

I know it was difficult but that fact that it moved you to tears is a wonderful compliment, thank you! And I’m glad you love Heron. He’s evolved so much from the original concept and I love writing him!

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You know what? I don't hate you. On the contrary , I think you took a great decision. It is tragic but still beautiful because they won't be used as lesson. Better yet, they proved their love to each other by taking their own lives on their own terms. That wasn't what they deserved but the setting of the story is already unfair and cruel to the workers so it's a proper end to fight for their conviction. I was saddened but in peace with their decision. 

Thank you! That’s exactly what I wanted to convey. It needed to happen to act as a catalyst for the others, but I wanted them to have dignity and choice in their end. I appreciate you reading and for your lovely comment!

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Thank you for answering me! That's always great to hear from you, dear author 💜

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OH MY GODD 😭

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I feel you 😭

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Chapter 10 is short, but the suspense is there. tbh i was NOT expecting some character deaths, but sacrifice is needed. But man... the Lion route is just so fluffy, i love my big builder hubby, he de best, please don't make him suffer. ANYWAY, at least Fawn and Bison could be in a better place and as always 10/10. Worth it.

Thank you! I knew chapter 10 would be a tough one, but the characters needed something to spur them into action, and it needed to be personal. I’m glad you still felt it worth it, and I’m glad you’re enjoying your time with your big builder hubby! 😁❤️

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*begins pursuit like a rabid animal*
RAHHHHHHH HOW COULD YOUUUUU
(in all seriousness tho, you're an amazin writer and i may or may not have been checking repeatedly for the past few hours before the update's release obsessively)

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*dives under a rock*

Haha, I’m so glad you were looking forward to it, and thank you so much for the comment!

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almost cried in public. 10/10

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While I’m sorry for the emotional trauma, that’s actually a wonderful compliment. 🥹

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my heart is broken and my day is ruined T-T i love it thank you so much

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I’m sorry! 😭 I promise it gets better from here!