Ahhh, I'm so obsessed with this. I love the lore and the world you've written and especially how natural the worldbuilding is. All the ROs are so interesting and varied too; I can't wait to see more of them but also more of the story!
Well, at the start the main character NEEDS to get somewhere so the story can start 🤷♀️ the options are mostly for your personality i guess and if you want to romance someone. Dunno how it will be in the future updates/chapters, but the start has a route it has to follow (Like if mc does stay there at the start, they'd probably die and the story basically wouldn't be. And you do have choices later on about your new life that YOU the reader chooses) Everyone has a different opinion tho so I'm not trying to argue with you 🙏 just trying to explain what i think
Hello. I’m not sure what choices you think are limiting; it’s difficult to address when your comment is so vague. I feel I’ve given you a wide breadth of control, but of course there are plot points that have to happen in the story. There are also scenes that play out based on choices you’ve already made. It’s impossible to account for every opinion and player perspective. I thank you for giving my story a try and I understand it may not be to everyone’s taste.
This is incredibly interesting! I was so excited with the tellus appearance. also ngl the persecution of the iredicci is reminding me of the persecution of another group in the history of the real world an awful lot...(Spectacular give me more)
Thank you! For the Iredicci, I was inspired by the plight of several indigenous peoples, most notably Native Americans. Unfortunately, I have many real world examples to pull from. 😢
But if it reminded you of such and gets readers thinking, then I wrote it well. Thank you for reading, and I can’t wait to show you more!
[Insert Zuko Scroll Meme] Nooo I need moreee! Where do I throw my money at for more?!
God, I loved where things are going! It was getting so much more interesting ahhhh. I'm so interested in learning more about the ROs but also about the story. I love the lore you made with this. I'm so fascinated with the idea of the magic with their singing, their voices and being one with nature. It's so fascinating and I get to learn new words and terms too!
Also, thank you for giving us a fur baby! More IF needs to give fur babies I tell ya!
Lol, I do have a KoFi account if you’re so interested. The link is on my profile page. 😁
I’m glad you’re enjoying it! I’m having so much fun with the language and lore in this, too. I can really spread my creative wings in a way I couldn’t with Viatica.
I appreciate your excitement, but it hasn’t even been 2 months since I released Chapter 3. 😅 I have a full time career and am the mother of 2 active teenagers; needless to say, I’m strapped for time. I anticipate publishing Chapter 4 around October. Thank you for your patience!
I felt like crying when I saw that end with T, the first time he was mentioned I felt attached. Osdmkdkodkdkdkd I am so emotionally invested in this, I swear I never fangirled this hard over a game and this is my first time commenting.
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Ahhh, I'm so obsessed with this. I love the lore and the world you've written and especially how natural the worldbuilding is. All the ROs are so interesting and varied too; I can't wait to see more of them but also more of the story!
I don't like.the main character is directly forced to choose what the author needs , and not what the reader needs .
Well, at the start the main character NEEDS to get somewhere so the story can start 🤷♀️ the options are mostly for your personality i guess and if you want to romance someone. Dunno how it will be in the future updates/chapters, but the start has a route it has to follow (Like if mc does stay there at the start, they'd probably die and the story basically wouldn't be. And you do have choices later on about your new life that YOU the reader chooses) Everyone has a different opinion tho so I'm not trying to argue with you 🙏 just trying to explain what i think
Hello. I’m not sure what choices you think are limiting; it’s difficult to address when your comment is so vague. I feel I’ve given you a wide breadth of control, but of course there are plot points that have to happen in the story. There are also scenes that play out based on choices you’ve already made. It’s impossible to account for every opinion and player perspective. I thank you for giving my story a try and I understand it may not be to everyone’s taste.
This is incredibly interesting! I was so excited with the tellus appearance. also ngl the persecution of the iredicci is reminding me of the persecution of another group in the history of the real world an awful lot...(Spectacular give me more)
Thank you! For the Iredicci, I was inspired by the plight of several indigenous peoples, most notably Native Americans. Unfortunately, I have many real world examples to pull from. 😢
But if it reminded you of such and gets readers thinking, then I wrote it well. Thank you for reading, and I can’t wait to show you more!
Oh my, I need more of Vincete...
Including, the last part about seeing Tellus was insane! I genuinely didn't expect it, I'm all here for it!!! Can't wait!!!!
Thank you! More Vicente coming in Chapter 4… 😏
My cold hubby ❤️❤️❤️
[Insert Zuko Scroll Meme] Nooo I need moreee! Where do I throw my money at for more?!
God, I loved where things are going! It was getting so much more interesting ahhhh. I'm so interested in learning more about the ROs but also about the story. I love the lore you made with this. I'm so fascinated with the idea of the magic with their singing, their voices and being one with nature. It's so fascinating and I get to learn new words and terms too!
Also, thank you for giving us a fur baby! More IF needs to give fur babies I tell ya!
Lol, I do have a KoFi account if you’re so interested. The link is on my profile page. 😁
I’m glad you’re enjoying it! I’m having so much fun with the language and lore in this, too. I can really spread my creative wings in a way I couldn’t with Viatica.
And you’re quite welcome for the fur baby!
COULD'VE AT LEAST SAVED US FROM THE TELLUS CLIFFHANGER ToT but another great work from you
Lol, thank you! I chuckled at the comment you left on Viatica. 😂 Thank you for giving my works a try!
I didn't see the notification till now but glad it gave you a laugh XD
Woah you really thought of everything 😂
I did NOT expect to get a reaction from what I named my pet 😂
Lol, I’ve got to credit an earlier commenter on here for giving me the idea! 😂
I love this IF so much, it's so unique and inspiring!!
Thank you so much! ❤️
I keep checking the development log hoping I'll see that chapter 4 is out 😭
I appreciate your excitement, but it hasn’t even been 2 months since I released Chapter 3. 😅 I have a full time career and am the mother of 2 active teenagers; needless to say, I’m strapped for time. I anticipate publishing Chapter 4 around October. Thank you for your patience!
No rush, just excited 😅 thanks so much!
YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME ON THAT CLIFFHANGER
Lol, a lot of chapter 4 probably should have been included in chapter 3, but I HAD to leave on that cliffhanger. 😁
Playing Viatica as I respond, loving this one so far too. Stop making good games! Leave some talent for the rest of us!
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Enjoyed this a lot, I'm looking forward to chapter 4, Calliope is so adorbs.
Thank you! Chapter 4 is coming steadily along. 😁
I need a hardcover copy of this immediately? OMG??? the music?? the pacing? the story, the CHARACTERS? I love it so much, great amazing work
Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
I really want Tellus to be the father of my (M) 50 children.
I felt like crying when I saw that end with T, the first time he was mentioned I felt attached. Osdmkdkodkdkdkd I am so emotionally invested in this, I swear I never fangirled this hard over a game and this is my first time commenting.
Thank you for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it! ☺️
The audacity to leave on cliffhanger like that, how could I ever forgive you T^T
Aww, you know I’ll make it up to you in the next update! 😉