This absolutely blew me away, I have rarely become so emotionally invested in a story this quick. All the characters are immediately endearing and your writing is so beautiful I kept tearing up during the emotional moments. AHHHHH ITS JUST SO GOOD
fir this is SO GOOD oh my god…. i played viatica and it was also wonderful but this is such a striking world and storyline GODFJHDSKF im so excited to see where the story goes.
First time I've commented but I LOVE THIS GAME. Love the premise, the magic, the choices and literally everything else. You got me all happy at the end with Tellus and then I let out an audible no when it was the end of the demo. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Ahh, I don't remember the last time I had so much joy from reading an IF~ The world you've created is super engaging, the concept of Iredicci is fascinating, I'm usually very worn out by long environment and scenery descriptions, but that was not the case when I was playing this IF. The characters, even though it's pretty early in the story (at least I hope so haha), are so distinctly different from each other and all very thought out, I love pretty much everything about this IF. Thank you so much for you hard work and this wonderful piece of art! <3
"TELLUS IS ALIVE AND A 5TH RO!?!?? GRAAAAAGAGAGAGAEHHEHEHEHEHEHAAAAAA" i scream as they drag me back to the white padded room
jokes aside, i have sadly been to busy to read the update before today(Family issues :/ )But i am reading it now and will update this when have finished it ^^
just finished reading the chapter and. . . FIR WHAT DID I DO TO YOU?? FIRST YOU MAKE ME THINK POOR SWEET TELLUS IS DEAD, THEN YOU MAKE HIM MORE FUCKING CUTE BY GIVING MC AN ACCESSORY, BUT MC\WE STILL THINK HES FUCKING DEAD, THEN YOU DO **THIS** 💔💔💔 I JUST CANNOT PICK WHO TO HAVE AS A RO NOW GRAAAAAA
first off, happy pride :3, second of all, i have returned from the depths of my ADHD meds not being stocked, huge autistic meltdown AT SCHOOL (i wont live that down), and drowning in schoolwork, just to simp over Vincente, Bayram, and Tellus. I want to squish themmmm >:DD RAHHH CHILDHOOD FRIENDS TO LOVERSSSS
all male ROs are huuugggeeee transition goals anywayyy, have a great day, Fir, i hope you find a 50 dollar note on the street, and to all my fellow trans nd gay babies, STAY SAFE I LOVE YOU ALL!!!
I love this story!! All the characters (boths ROs and non ROs) are so charming and intriguing. The writing is very engaging – had me throw my hands up in disappointment when I met the ‘end of demo’ page.
“The relationships were purely physical. You’re no stranger to sex, and that’s all you wanted from them.”
Does this lock you out of romance? I’ll bite the bullet and choose the second option if I have to, but I don’t want to cuz it’s out of character for my mc to have wanted to have gone deeper with anyone they’ve met so far, what with the iredicci genocide thing :/
edit: Oooh I code dived and it seems it only tracks being a virgin. Awesome!
Hello! You won’t have any choices that unwittingly lock you out of romance, it always comes down to a deliberate choice. You can even choose to abstain in the eventual sex scenes and still be on a romance route. 😊
Also, not sure how I feel about code diving, lol 😬 though I understand it’s a common thing for this media. Just know there may be spoilers in there.
The way i dropped and fell to my knees at the end of chapter 3. You are one cruel woman, Fir. Genius, but cruel. God, I need to buy aloe gel for my eyes. Hurts from crying too much 🥲
I love the story and premise of this game, the iredecci seem very interesting and i'm excited to see the kind of person the MC becomes and how the story progresses. I love these kind of games they are my favorite, good job.
hi,just hear me out. like what if in the next ch when you see Tellus you run up to him and jump upto hug him. like a koala . Just think about it. aaaahhh.
lol,exreme.But I like your enthusiasm.OMG. Imagine like when you jump him you impulsively kiss him then you realize to late what you did and stare at each other in embarrassment. My imagination is running a little to wild. I'll stop now.
It’s because he was a major surprise bomb I just dropped on everyone 2 weeks ago, lol. He wasn’t originally going to be alive, much less an RO in my original draft. 😅 His bar will be included in future updates.
Vicente is bbg I swear, he's just so 😋😍. And before I found out Dirk was actually Vicente, I was actually kind of sad he wasn't a romance option, then i realized he was🖤. I can't wait for the rest!!
Jogo perfeito, mas deveria ter alguma forma de salvar seu progresso, qmo tanto esse jogo, mas toda vez q eu entro tenho q jogar tudo denovo. Pois toda vez q saio do jogo meu processo é perdido
Hello! Ok so if Google translate worked, you didn’t know how to save? Click on the arrow in the middle there and you can save. I’d recommend exporting your saves, too. 😁
Of course! It’s difficult not to fall for her futchly charms and strong personality. She’s like what I aspire to be, disciplined and righteous. I really love her. Thanks for creating her and this story 🖤
Actually it’s 3 chapters, no prologue, and a very rough estimate would be 14-15 chapters. I’m not sure where you got your info but it’s incorrect. This story is still very early stages. 🙂
Hello! If you look at the link “more information” you can see this IF is listed as in development. You can also see the published date, which was January of this year. It’s still very new but I’ve got big things planned. Thank you for giving it a try!
Tbh Calliope is such a goofball 😂❤️ I wonder what exactly she thought when she saw the weapon 🤔, she probably thought of her dad who honestly (at least to me from the encounter in chapter 2) seemed like a nice man who loves his daughter [okay i should stop talking before i start rambling and this comment gets too long]
OHHH MY GOOOOD !!!! chapter 3 was a banger... so many people to romance... oh my !! and that ENDING!!! how could you leave us on such a cliffhanger </3 i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
TELLUS MY BOY AAAAA A *writhing on the floor and foaming at the mouth* like i adore this if so much and when we discovered tellus had died i was so distraught, so this reveal had me screaming fr! i am so excited for future updates and getting to reunite with him aaa thank you sm for sharing your beautiful writing with us, it bring me such joy
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This absolutely blew me away, I have rarely become so emotionally invested in a story this quick. All the characters are immediately endearing and your writing is so beautiful I kept tearing up during the emotional moments. AHHHHH ITS JUST SO GOOD
fir this is SO GOOD oh my god…. i played viatica and it was also wonderful but this is such a striking world and storyline GODFJHDSKF im so excited to see where the story goes.
First time I've commented but I LOVE THIS GAME. Love the premise, the magic, the choices and literally everything else. You got me all happy at the end with Tellus and then I let out an audible no when it was the end of the demo. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you so much! I do update fairly regularly so you’ll see Tellus again soon! 😉
Ahh, I don't remember the last time I had so much joy from reading an IF~ The world you've created is super engaging, the concept of Iredicci is fascinating, I'm usually very worn out by long environment and scenery descriptions, but that was not the case when I was playing this IF. The characters, even though it's pretty early in the story (at least I hope so haha), are so distinctly different from each other and all very thought out, I love pretty much everything about this IF. Thank you so much for you hard work and this wonderful piece of art! <3
You are most welcome, and thank you for your kind words! And yes, it is still pretty early on; there’s much more to see!
You are an artist! This is so good I could cry (I did)!
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My MC, holding up their pet fox (who they named after Tellus) and looking @ Tellus: "This is our SON!"
I am vibrating with how excited I am for the next chapter aaaa!!! Please please I want to hug Tellus so tightly and never let go again :')
“our son” 😂
You won’t be hugging him just yet, but I appreciate the sentiment!
Wait, we won't?? Noooooooo😭😭😭😭😭😭
"TELLUS IS ALIVE AND A 5TH RO!?!?? GRAAAAAGAGAGAGAEHHEHEHEHEHEHAAAAAA" i scream as they drag me back to the white padded room
jokes aside, i have sadly been to busy to read the update before today(Family issues :/ )But i am reading it now and will update this when have finished it ^^
just finished reading the chapter and. . . FIR WHAT DID I DO TO YOU?? FIRST YOU MAKE ME THINK POOR SWEET TELLUS IS DEAD, THEN YOU MAKE HIM MORE FUCKING CUTE BY GIVING MC AN ACCESSORY, BUT MC\WE STILL THINK HES FUCKING DEAD, THEN YOU DO **THIS** 💔💔💔 I JUST CANNOT PICK WHO TO HAVE AS A RO NOW GRAAAAAA
Lol, welcome back yorbb! I hope your family issues have resolved. Sorry
not sorryabout the new development! 😈first off, happy pride :3, second of all, i have returned from the depths of my ADHD meds not being stocked, huge autistic meltdown AT SCHOOL (i wont live that down), and drowning in schoolwork, just to simp over Vincente, Bayram, and Tellus. I want to squish themmmm >:DD RAHHH CHILDHOOD FRIENDS TO LOVERSSSS
all male ROs are huuugggeeee transition goals
anywayyy,
have a great day, Fir, i hope you find a 50 dollar note on the street, and to all my fellow trans nd gay babies, STAY SAFE I LOVE YOU ALL!!!
i fully agree about all the male ROs being transition goals (Happy pride btw >:D )
YES HAPPY PRIDE!!!!! >:3
Hahaha, the 50 dollar note is so specific, but thank you!! 😂
I’m glad to see you back and well, my friend! You stay safe, too, and happy pride! 💕
CHAPTER 4 GIMME!!!
I love this story!! All the characters (boths ROs and non ROs) are so charming and intriguing. The writing is very engaging – had me throw my hands up in disappointment when I met the ‘end of demo’ page.
Thank you!
“The relationships were purely physical. You’re no stranger to sex, and that’s all you wanted from them.”
Does this lock you out of romance? I’ll bite the bullet and choose the second option if I have to, but I don’t want to cuz it’s out of character for my mc to have wanted to have gone deeper with anyone they’ve met so far, what with the iredicci genocide thing :/
edit: Oooh I code dived and it seems it only tracks being a virgin. Awesome!
Hello! You won’t have any choices that unwittingly lock you out of romance, it always comes down to a deliberate choice. You can even choose to abstain in the eventual sex scenes and still be on a romance route. 😊
Also, not sure how I feel about code diving, lol 😬 though I understand it’s a common thing for this media. Just know there may be spoilers in there.
The way i dropped and fell to my knees at the end of chapter 3. You are one cruel woman, Fir. Genius, but cruel. God, I need to buy aloe gel for my eyes. Hurts from crying too much 🥲
Hahaha, sorry rvnwd! 🫶🏻 Once your eyes recover, I hope it inspires more of your gorgeous art!
You know it will. I hope you stumble upon a dollar or two in day to day basis and your pillow stay cold on both sides 🫡❤️
I love the story and premise of this game, the iredecci seem very interesting and i'm excited to see the kind of person the MC becomes and how the story progresses. I love these kind of games they are my favorite, good job.
Thank you!
Omg this story is incredible. I really hope to let the mask slip soon, I've been dying to talk again! Maybe as much as my character!
Thank you! You won’t full on drop it for a while, but you’ll have little moments where it slips a bit. 😉
hi,just hear me out. like what if in the next ch when you see Tellus you run up to him and jump upto hug him. like a koala . Just think about it. aaaahhh.
I will Storm fir's house with a pitchfork and torch if this isnt added trust
lol,exreme.But I like your enthusiasm.OMG. Imagine like when you jump him you impulsively kiss him then you realize to late what you did and stare at each other in embarrassment. My imagination is running a little to wild. I'll stop now.
running off to write a fanfic now (I cannot write for the life of me )
I’m afraid this won’t happen, lol. But trust that I’ve got good things planned. 😁
'tis fine . I'll love what you write no matter what.(;
Do you mind me asking why Tellus isn't in the Relationships tab? Is it because I haven't met him again?
It’s because he was a major surprise bomb I just dropped on everyone 2 weeks ago, lol. He wasn’t originally going to be alive, much less an RO in my original draft. 😅 His bar will be included in future updates.
Thank you for your response. That makes sense.
Vicente is bbg I swear, he's just so 😋😍. And before I found out Dirk was actually Vicente, I was actually kind of sad he wasn't a romance option, then i realized he was🖤. I can't wait for the rest!!
i just finished the demo, and how dare you end it on a cliffhanger, ive already changed my favorite, its tellus now 🖤🖤
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Jogo perfeito, mas deveria ter alguma forma de salvar seu progresso, qmo tanto esse jogo, mas toda vez q eu entro tenho q jogar tudo denovo. Pois toda vez q saio do jogo meu processo é perdido
Hello! Ok so if Google translate worked, you didn’t know how to save? Click on the arrow in the middle there and you can save. I’d recommend exporting your saves, too. 😁
Corinne, my beloved… I will protect you.
Yay, Corinne romancer! 🙌🏻
Of course! It’s difficult not to fall for her futchly charms and strong personality. She’s like what I aspire to be, disciplined and righteous. I really love her. Thanks for creating her and this story 🖤
who keeps downvoting you 😭
Right?! I thought that, too! Their comment is nothing but love and Corinne is fabulous. 💪🏻
I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS A DEMO </3
it's a demo? like is it short or long enough?
it’s prologue + three chapters, estimated to be ten chapters when finished iirc (so it’s nearly a third)
Actually it’s 3 chapters, no prologue, and a very rough estimate would be 14-15 chapters. I’m not sure where you got your info but it’s incorrect. This story is still very early stages. 🙂
Best news I've heard all night.
Hello! If you look at the link “more information” you can see this IF is listed as in development. You can also see the published date, which was January of this year. It’s still very new but I’ve got big things planned. Thank you for giving it a try!
THE ARTTTTT>>>>
My artist Isabela is amazing! ❤️
Tbh Calliope is such a goofball 😂❤️ I wonder what exactly she thought when she saw the weapon 🤔, she probably thought of her dad who honestly (at least to me from the encounter in chapter 2) seemed like a nice man who loves his daughter [okay i should stop talking before i start rambling and this comment gets too long]
I’m glad you like Calliope! Thank you for reading!
I yearn for Tellus like a man yearning for water in a desert...
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WHY do i always miss the updates when they happen 😭
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Nooooo, it can't end there!? 😭 How am I gonna choose between Vicente and Tellus?
At least let me hug Tellus the human in next chapter. Also, I loved getting the chance to sing a dirge for our family and ppl.
Lol, sorry for making your choice harder. 😅 And I’m so glad you liked that scene, that was probably my favorite!
OMGGGGGGGGGGG IM FANGIRLLING OVER EVERYONEEE
YIPPEEEEEE
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OMGGGGGG PLSS WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE OMG TELLUS OMGOMGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!
Glad you’re excited but next chapter won’t be for a while; I’m estimating September/October timeframe. 🙂
RAHHHHH VINCENTE!!!!! i'm at school and have set his art as my wallpaper. I am a forever procrastinator for you, Fir. :3333
Yasss! I love that!
finally someone loves me procrastinating lmao <3 :3
That cliffhanger was absolutely diabolical.
Brilliantly done.
Thank you! 😈
OHHH MY GOOOOD !!!! chapter 3 was a banger... so many people to romance... oh my !! and that ENDING!!! how could you leave us on such a cliffhanger </3
i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
Lol, the next chapter will be worth it, I promise! 🫶🏻
ohh i have no doubt haha !! can't wait<3
TELLUS MY BOY AAAAA A *writhing on the floor and foaming at the mouth* like i adore this if so much and when we discovered tellus had died i was so distraught, so this reveal had me screaming fr! i am so excited for future updates and getting to reunite with him aaa thank you sm for sharing your beautiful writing with us, it bring me such joy
Thank you for your kind words! I’m excited that you’re excited 😆